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“A Kiss Mandala”

April 20, 2011

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Oh my would you look at him
Dressed in that elegant silver suit
With a kissy ribbon tie
I am tempted
So tempted
To pull that tie off
And rip up that silver shirt
Can’t stand this temptation
I NEED A KISS!!

Tear!
Rip!
Pop!
Yummy!
Ahhhhhh!!!!!!

One is never enough:) 

My first try at freeform poetry.  I got inspired one day and this was the result.

Posted for Thursday’s Poets Rally

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53 Comments leave one →
  1. April 20, 2011 10:12 am

    Good Lord, now that was sensually delicious 😀 what a poem.. imagine it as you read, and I think it gets more of the romance than the chocolate kiss 😉 liked it a lot! 😀

  2. April 20, 2011 10:16 am

    Mouthwatering! In more ways than I should admit. Like Vinay, I experienced each line. Great way to kick off the rally. I must go get a chocolate candy.

    Enjoy the rally. Here’s mine: http://kmcgeepoet.wordpress.com/2011/04/20/warning-lights/

  3. April 20, 2011 10:16 am

    Thanks Vinay and K. McGee. I’m so happy you like it. That was my purpose because some people do have a romantic relationship with chocolate. My husband for example. lol

  4. thingy permalink
    April 20, 2011 10:39 am

    This is becoming my favorite spot to visit. Love it, Teri.

  5. April 20, 2011 11:46 am

    so clever, I can taste it. well done 🙂

  6. April 20, 2011 12:17 pm

    woww now that’s tempting 😀
    enjoyed reading 😀

  7. April 20, 2011 1:35 pm

    Loved this, you should try more.. this was an awesome write.

  8. April 20, 2011 2:48 pm

    Absolutely brilliant! There’s nothing like a kiss or two or three or….

  9. April 20, 2011 3:24 pm

    Thanks everyone. I hope you all ran out for chocolate…or something 🙂

  10. John Evans permalink
    April 20, 2011 3:34 pm

    Hi Teri,
    Very nice 1st free form…I liked everything about this poem. Thanks for sharing! Thanks also for visiting my place. Have a happy week creating.

  11. April 20, 2011 3:46 pm

    Lovely…and could kiss them “brown things” a thousand times and long for more. Enjoyed this. Thanks for visiting.

  12. April 20, 2011 4:49 pm

    WOW! This one is lusty!

  13. April 20, 2011 5:50 pm

    Well Kim, I got the right response from you. I wrote it so it would work that way or not depending on the reader. Thanks for visiting.

  14. April 20, 2011 5:53 pm

    I love it all, your art work (the pink speaks of passion), and even the way you centered the wording – all of it very artistically done. And the hint of chocolate peaking out….

  15. April 20, 2011 6:22 pm

    Thank you thursdayschild. I’m always happy when my artwork is noticed the way you did.

  16. April 20, 2011 7:06 pm

    Ah the absolute homage to The Kiss! I loved this piece and I am so glad to find you through the rally…I love mandalas…cannot wait to view your works! ~ Rose

  17. April 20, 2011 9:11 pm

    wow, so romantic and fun words…

    well done.
    🙂

  18. April 20, 2011 9:58 pm

    Thanks C Rose and Jingle.

  19. April 20, 2011 11:58 pm

    yes, one is never enough and for sucha passionate kiss..oh so never 😉 much liked 🙂

  20. April 21, 2011 12:13 am

    Mmmm chocolate kisses…yummy free verse!

  21. April 21, 2011 12:18 am

    wow teri! fantastic kiss! 🙂

  22. April 21, 2011 2:27 am

    That was so romantic ! The last line added to temptation 😛 !! Lovely !

  23. Julian Javier the Cyber Mushroom permalink
    April 21, 2011 4:17 am

    delicious poem! i love kisses too! hehehe! this kinda reminded me of my Tanka “Mountain Dew” which is an appreciation tanka for that sweet drink!

  24. April 21, 2011 4:45 am

    sweet stuff! and your artwork is awesome. 🙂

  25. April 21, 2011 6:13 am

    I got a toothache just reading! 🙂 So sweet!

  26. April 21, 2011 8:58 am

    I’m so glad that the nearest shop is 6 miles away:D Very nice artwork an poetry Teri:)

  27. April 21, 2011 9:56 am

    Hi! Love your blog! I awarded you the stylish poet award!

    http://bttrflyscar.blogspot.com/2011/04/oh-boy.html

  28. April 21, 2011 11:06 am

    Thanks everyone. I bet there is a run on the chocolate stores. lol
    Thanks for the award a.m. tremble.

  29. April 21, 2011 11:28 am

    very playful.

  30. honeyhaiku permalink
    April 21, 2011 3:02 pm

    This is fun. I think we have all disrobed for a kiss!

  31. April 21, 2011 3:43 pm

    Thanks to both of you.
    Honeyhaiku–LOL

  32. April 21, 2011 6:19 pm

    was not expecting that lol….nice

  33. April 21, 2011 6:20 pm

    Temptation so sweet! Love this….

  34. April 21, 2011 6:48 pm

    Thanks Swanrose and thhoughtsnotlost.

  35. April 21, 2011 6:53 pm

    awww that was cute Teri and now I want some all due to that tempting piece you wrote hmm lovely!!! 🙂

  36. April 22, 2011 1:37 am

    wooooo! thats alot of passion if one is not enough lol.. my thursday post : http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/20/me-before-us/

  37. April 22, 2011 1:45 am

    That was yummy indeed. Nice job.

  38. April 22, 2011 8:22 am

    ah! what a nice feeling..it was so different and written so effectively.

    Tasty work 😉 !

    Alcina

  39. April 22, 2011 2:33 pm

    Lovely 🙂 Liked it too much

  40. April 22, 2011 3:30 pm

    Bring on the kisses! Delightful and meltingly delicious!

  41. April 22, 2011 5:59 pm

    Thanks. I want you all to know that I giggle at your reactions and they are just the ones I expected.

  42. Victoria permalink
    April 23, 2011 12:51 am

    Fun and playful, a reminder that I don’t always have to be so serious with my poetry.

  43. April 23, 2011 11:36 am

    cho.. chweet… awesome teri… a first ~ sweet ~ pour for you to enjoy…

    Someone is Special

  44. April 24, 2011 4:55 am

    That sure was a naughty one. Funny, and fun. 🙂

  45. April 25, 2011 1:55 am

    aawwww that was soooo sweet…loved it…

  46. April 26, 2011 12:34 am

    Brilliant teri! Love the artwork and your cheeky wordplay! 🙂

  47. April 26, 2011 8:31 pm

    fab. i imagine a foil-suited lover waiting, sweating under layers of anxious anticipation. while a neighbor ponders his turn …

  48. ticklyturtle permalink
    April 27, 2011 8:44 am

    Gotta love the Hershey kiss. 😀 The typography is nice. When I look at it, I see a kind of chalice. ^_^ Good work.

  49. April 28, 2011 2:42 am

    so true: “one is never enough”

  50. April 28, 2011 2:44 pm

    Ahem, ahem. Good one. Love the mandala.

  51. September 14, 2011 6:45 pm

    Oh what a sweetie this one is!!!

  52. September 12, 2015 11:36 am

    yes that one is cute, funny and wildly imaginitive.
    Janice

  53. September 12, 2015 11:40 am

    Thanks, I look back and wonder where it all comes from. Lol

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